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Samem

I want to start off by saying that the essay is filled with information on the community of Azeroth. I could not find the map, which is the first issue of this blog. Without the map, the readers would not know if you are talking about the community or the map that you drew. Another issue with this post is that the essay is not talking about the map that you did. In other words, you are basically telling the readers how the Shaker community was during the 19th century, but you are not talking about the map that you came up with. The purpose of this blog was for the groups to make a map and then describe the map to the reader and give examples to show that it is accurate. I would suggest that you should point out the different structures from your map and then use the examples that you used to describe the Shaker community to support and use as evidence to show the readers that the map is related to the this ideology.

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